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El The Istari
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« Reply #60 on: June 09, 2003, 12:47:38 pm »
Here's a poem I wrote.

As usual, no title. Any suggestions on this front would be good.

Also, I'm having some trouble with the rhyming, so don't make the crittism too harsh!  ;)

Oh and, thank you Lar, for helping me write some of it. :)

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I am dead
I am bound
Inside my head
'Til I am found
I am blind
I must ache
I've lost my mind
This is fake

This heart is cold
Someone free me
The air is sold
I can not see
Death is here
I am numb
I can not fear
I crave the sun

So many cries
Not a sound
I need the skies
I feel the ground
I am the cold
This is insane
I am the sold
Made my silent refrain

I am dead
I am bound
Inside my head
'Til I am found
I am blind
I must ache
I've lost my mind
This is fake

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Thanks for reading!

Any help would be gladly recieved.
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« Reply #61 on: June 09, 2003, 12:50:11 pm »
I know i have read it in school already but i like it!

Keep writing!  ;D
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« Reply #62 on: June 09, 2003, 01:09:08 pm »
No probs! I love that poem though. I liked the one by W B Yeates (not sure if thats the right name though) The Stolen Child.

Come away! O' human child.
To the woods and waters wild
with a fairy hand in hand
for the owrlds more full of weeping
than you can understand.

That's not the whole thing, but I can't be bothered trying to remember the whole thing. I know it pretty well too!  ;)  ;D
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« Reply #63 on: June 09, 2003, 01:19:01 pm »
What do you think of the new words?
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« Reply #64 on: June 09, 2003, 01:20:57 pm »
I love the new words. They fit really well!  ;D
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« Reply #65 on: June 09, 2003, 01:23:24 pm »
Are you sure?

I wasn't sure about the "I must ache" line.


I think I'll post it on MT...
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« Reply #66 on: June 09, 2003, 01:28:26 pm »
No, that line fits perfectly, it sounded a bit off earlier, but adding that line was a really good idea.  ;D

Oh, if mrs Cook had read what we were saying about her earlier... ;)
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El The Istari
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« Reply #67 on: June 09, 2003, 01:37:48 pm »
Lol!

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« Reply #68 on: June 09, 2003, 01:41:37 pm »
Is it just me or can everyone else see 2 Hey! Post me somethings 2s?  :-/
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« Reply #69 on: June 09, 2003, 01:44:54 pm »
No, but marriges and adoptins has disappeard! It's not fair!  >:( >:(

I'm actually panicking amazingly a lot right now!!!  :'(

I think that you're right. I just checked, and there are two H!PMS!'s!!! ARRGGGHHH! Whats going on???
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« Reply #70 on: June 09, 2003, 01:47:31 pm »
I can see 2 Hey! Post me something 2s!  :-/

WHAT IS GOING ON?!

I'm confused.  :-/  ???  :P
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« Reply #71 on: June 09, 2003, 02:35:27 pm »
I don't know what the .... is going on!!! ARGH!!! Someone do something!
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« Reply #72 on: July 20, 2003, 03:49:27 am »
Dude! Get back at her with [link]www.ratemyteacher.com[/link]
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« Reply #73 on: July 20, 2003, 07:43:33 am »
Well, most of the people who posted in this thread are from scotland, so technically, that is quite difficult.
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« Reply #74 on: July 31, 2003, 01:45:20 pm »
Yes, we are in the "South south, and yes, south again, US"  ;)
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Of course I'm out of my mind, it's dark and scary in there!
Forget the dogs of war. The wolves of war are what you should be worrying about.
Excuse me, I seem to have found a Heero in my shoe.
FOR SALE: 1 set of morals, never used
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