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El The Istari
Demon God(ess)
Posts: 275
I am the pic theif. You are next. Yes, you.
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« Reply #46 on: May 26, 2003, 04:29:00 am » |
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Okay, this has no name, and needs a lot of work.
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Julie hid in the closet, holding her breath. What if they found her?
She clung to the coats hanging around her, hiding her face, as if it would make it stop, as if it would make them go away.
The door flew open.
"I found her!" Jason cried, his face contorted with glee.
He grabbed Julie's long hair and pulled her out of the cupboard.
He released her hair and pushed her into the circle.
Julie cried out in pain.
Ally was the first to strike. He grabbed her arm and twisted it around.
Julie's eyes filled with tears. Ally had been her friend. But now he had turned against er.
Lee was next, He kicked her violently in the shin.
A gasp of pain erupted form Julie's mouth.
Kirsty slapped her round face again and again. She hated Julied, even when once they had been best friends.
Stephanie pushed her to the ground and kicked her head.
Julie lay on the floor. Tears of pain flowed down her face as the group made her suffer without mercy.
When they finally left, Julie felt too weak to move. She felt too weak to even call for help.
They had broken her. She was in so much pain, not just physically.
She had trusted them.
And they had hated her.
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What do you all think?
Any suggestions for a title?
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Of course I'm out of my mind, it's dark and scary in there!
Forget the dogs of war. The wolves of war are what you should be worrying about.
Excuse me, I seem to have found a Heero in my shoe.
FOR SALE: 1 set of morals, never used
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