Pictures!!!

[larewen_evenstar]

I have more images!!! (I know I'm double posting)

http://img.villagephotos.com/p/2003-5/181128/MEZIU-book.jpg

This is the cover to my book.

http://img.villagephotos.com/p/2003-5/181128/goddess.jpg

Kia as a goddess. War actually.

http://img.villagephotos.com/p/2003-5/181128/girlgroup.jpg

The bathing suit pic! Kia is not chatting up Freya! You get the wrong impression, you die!

http://img.villagephotos.com/p/2003-5/181128/kiss.jpg

Kia and the guy who is currently called Quatre (I know it's obvious that its copied) kissing.

I'll try to do some more some time, until then, they will have to do.

[Captain Southbird (EHOL Creator)]

http://img.villagephotos.com/p/2003-5/181128/MEZIU-book.jpg
This is the cover to my book.

At least it looks like you have the eye design down pretty well.

http://img.villagephotos.com/p/2003-5/181128/goddess.jpg

Kia as a goddess. War actually.

That's a nice one.

http://img.villagephotos.com/p/2003-5/181128/girlgroup.jpg

The bathing suit pic! Kia is not chatting up Freya! You get the wrong impression, you die!

Not too bad.  A little criticism -- The one on the far left, her arms look a little funny, although I know cross-arms is a hard thing to do for some reason.  Also, it looks like one breast is slightly a different size than the other, although that could be a perceptive thing.  :p  The rest of them seem okay, although maybe #2's hand is just a little bit small.  But hands are supposed to be one of the hardest things in the world to draw.

http://img.villagephotos.com/p/2003-5/181128/kiss.jpg

Kia and the guy who is currently called Quatre (I know it's obvious that its copied) kissing.

Not bad, but the guy's head seems just a little big.

[El The Istari]

It's still not working!

Aarrgh!  

[pixiegirl]

Ther'e all good in my opinion...but don't ask me!

El. I don't know what is wrong because they are obviosly working for Rob and are defenetly working for me! :-/

Not quite sure about any of my spelling...

[larewen_evenstar]

Thank you Stix.

Not too bad.  A little criticism -- The one on the far left, her arms look a little funny, although I know cross-arms is a hard thing to do for some reason.  Also, it looks like one breast is slightly a different size than the other, although that could be a perceptive thing.  :p  The rest of them seem okay, although maybe #2's hand is just a little bit small.  But hands are supposed to be one of the hardest things in the world to draw.

I personally find hands very hard to draw. That and feet.
And yes, one of Serina's breasts is bigger than the other.
And Kia's hand went pretty badly in that one. I tend to try to hide the hands, it can sometimes be really difficult though.

Not bad, but the guy's head seems just a little big.

It's the angle, if someone saw you from that angle, your head would probably look really big.
(I'm not saying that you have a big head.

[executor82]

Don't take this wrong, but specifically in what way?

Well I like your drawings, it remembers me of the time when I started to draw. I had to prepare 15 drawings for the entrence exam at my school, where I'm doing my finals now. Ok, there wasn't manga, but I tried it from time to time then.

In the end drew 125 pictures and took the 15 best of them to the exam. (That was about 3 month of drawing every day  ) I also realized that hands and feet are REALLY hard to draw!

Your drawings are pretty good so far, but keep in mind:
practice is the key to mastery
(sounds like some chinese kung fu master or something, huh? But actually my dad told me that back then  )

To Rob: that was a good one!!!  

[pixiegirl]

Compared with some of my drawings they could have been done by Van Gough! (sp?)    

They are great especially the one with Kia on her own!

I have to say that the bathing suit picture looks wrong.  

Please don't hit me!

But apart from that they are all really good!

[larewen_evenstar]

Well, in the original version, Kia had her hand on freya's shoulder, but with the expression on Kia and Freya's faces, I changed it to her backside.
Strange that, because in the second book, Freya and Karrie start going out. (Karrie is the one right at the end, who you can hardly see)

[pixiegirl]

Oh it's all clear now!  

[Kathy Guinea]

Compared with some of my drawings they could have been done by Van Gough! (sp?)    

Van Gogh


Anyhow, nice pictures Lar. I think everyone else has already given appropriate criticism and praise. So all I can say is "Keep drawing!" you're off to a good start! ^_^

(have you ever considered taking extra classes? The only way to get good is to practice... and that would definately let you practice!)

[larewen_evenstar]

Well, in fist year and second year, you get two periods of art a week, and art club is really boring, so there isn't really anything I can do.
I'd join an art club if they had an anime art club, but they don't, so I'm stuck.

[executor82]

We could put up our own in the forum  
How about it? Everyone who likes may post his pics and we could talk about them and exchange experience, give advice and so on?

I also thought of a topic for "german and english lessons" but I don't know If I should open up the topic...

[Captain Southbird (EHOL Creator)]

You mean photographs or artworks?

[executor82]

Everything!!! All useful images!

[larewen_evenstar]

Well, I'm not sure about the german English lessons, but everyone posting his or her pictures seems like an alright idea.