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theravenisdead
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« on: August 12, 2003, 05:53:56 PM »

Just finished chapter one of my fanfic. Ive also uploaded what little fanfic I have so far to FanFiction.net so you can read it there as well as at my website.

Comments are welcome.
Remember this fic is a first for me, and Im writing this purely for leisure purposes. So bear with me  ^^;

*Gives Xel a hug and joins her in the 60th post club*  ;D
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« Reply #1 on: August 13, 2003, 12:44:41 PM »

Read it! ^_^V

Still don't have much to comment on, though - much like the prologue, this is basically an establishing chapter, letting us know where the characters are and what they are doing. There's still little sign of what sort of plot you have in store, and when that starts to come together is when the comments should really start rolling.

It IS rather interesting that the prologue and the first chapter, in addition to being eleven years and millions of miles apart, don't seem to have any real connection to one another. I'm sure that that mystery will be solved, though, as you continue writing. :)

Enjoying it so far!
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« Reply #2 on: August 13, 2003, 10:50:04 PM »

Wait, is this an EH fanfic or what?  If it is, it technically could be put in the main forum.  I haven't the time at the moment to go digging around ff.net to verify either way, sorry.  :P
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« Reply #3 on: August 20, 2003, 03:33:04 PM »

Yup, its an EH fanfic. One im working on in my spare time.  8)

Im a newb at this, so bear with me    ^^;
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« Reply #4 on: September 03, 2003, 02:37:23 PM »

I think im gonna put Chapter two on hold untill I have moved out of my parents house. Which I will be doing in November. So till then the fanfic is on temporary hiatus.

Sorry for any inconvenience, but I need a good place to concentrate and I wont have that until i move out.
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« Reply #5 on: September 04, 2003, 05:19:01 AM »



Hey Shayla!

Is that the fanfiction you have in your site?
I already read it....

It was nice  ::)

My suggestions will come next !! ;D
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